Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart (Phần 25)

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Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

The charts below give information about the amount of time children spend with their parents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

Introduction

The bar charts compare how much time children below the age of 9 spend with their parents.

Overall

During weekdays, all these children enjoy less than 10 hours’ parental companionship, with those aged between 4 and 5 spending just above 8 hrs with parents. 

Body paragraph 1

It is also evident that, for a large part of this time, about 4 to 6 hrs, only mothers keep these children company. For 1 to 2 hrs during the weekdays, children only have their dads around. Children aged from 6 to 9 are fortunate to have both parents with them for more than 2 hrs, whereas those below 6 years old only spend no more than 1 hour with both mom and dad.

Body paragraph 2

On weekends, at least 5 hrs are spent with both parents, particularly 4–5-year-olds who have 6 hrs with both parents’ companionship. Mothers still contribute 3 to 4 hrs of child-care on their own, while dads only spend an insignificant amount of time with their children alone, although 4–5-year-olds have up to 2 hrs with just their dads.

To sum up, though most of the time children are accompanied by mothers, they spend more time with parents on weekends, with fathers being more available.

Từ vựng tích lũy

Từ, cụm từNghĩaVí dụ
compareso sánhThe bar charts compare how much time children…
less thanít hơnall these children enjoy less than 10 hours’ parental companionship…
aged betweenở độ tuổi từthose aged between 4 and 5 spending just above 8 hours with parents
It is also evident thatRõ ràng làIt is also evident that, for a large part of this time…
keep these children companyở cùng với các trẻonly mothers keep these children company
on their ownmột mìnhMothers still contribute 3 to 4 hours of child-care on their own
an insignificant amount of timemột khoảng thời gian không đáng kểdads only spend an insignificant amount of time with their children alone
spend no more thankhông dành quáthose below 6 years old only spend no more than 1 hour with both mom and dad
at leastít nhấtOn weekends, by contrast, at least 5 hours are spent with both parents
by contrastngược lạiOn weekends, by contrast, at least 5 hours are spent with both parents
contributeđóng gópMothers still contribute 3 to 4 hours of child-care on their own
fortunate to havemay mắn cóChildren aged from 6 to 9 are fortunate to have both parents with them…
accompanied byđược đồng hành bởithough most of the time children are accompanied by mothers…

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