Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Mixed chart (Phần 11)

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bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Mixed chart (Phần 11)

Trong phần thi IELTS Writing Task 1, một trong những dạng đề thường gặp là biểu đồ Kết hợp (Mixed chart). Nhằm giúp các bạn học viên tham khảo và ôn tập tốt cho bài thi IELTS Writing sắp tới, TutorIn Education đã sưu tầm series Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Mixed Chart. Cùng đến với Phần 11 của loạt bài này nhé!

Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Mixed chart

The table and chart below give information about employment in Australia by age group in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Mixed chart

Introduction

The table and bar chart illustrate the employment rates in Australia in 2011, according to age and gender.

Overview

In general, the employment rates of the full-time and part-time population were relatively high for those aged between 20 and 54, while the lowest lay in those aged over 65. The percentages of females doing part-time jobs far exceeded males, especially among 35–54-year-olds.

Body paragraph 1

Regarding the total employment rates for both full-time and part-time jobs, the data for people aged 20-54 was above 80%, slightly higher than that of those aged 55-59, at 73%. The figure for the youngest age group (15-19) was about 60%, while in the categories of people aged 60-64 and over the age of 65, the employment rate was very low, at only 17% and 12%.

Body paragraph 2

As to males and females in part-time employment rates, the proportion of females having part-time jobs was much higher than that of males in most age groups. The most marked disparity can be seen in the 35-44 and 45-54 age groups, five times larger than the percentages of males. In the oldest age group, however, the proportion of males working part-time doubled that of females.

Từ vựng tích lũy IELTS Writing Task 1

Từ vựng/ Cụm từ vựngNghĩa Tiếng ViệtVí dụ trong bài
far exceededVượt xaThe percentages of females doing part-time jobs far exceeded males
marked disparitySự chênh lệch rõ rệtthe most marked disparity can be seen in the 35-44 and 45-54 age groups
five times largerGấp 5 lầnfive times larger than the percentages of males
oldest age groupNhóm tuổi cao nhấtin the oldest age group, however, the proportion of males working part-time doubled that of females
total employment ratesTỷ lệ việc làm tổng thểthe total employment rates for both full-time and part-time jobs
slightly higherCao hơn một chútslightly higher than that of those aged 55-59

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