Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart (Phần 23)

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Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

The bar charts below show the information about the population in a particular town in the UK from 1951 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

Introduction

The first bar chart illustrates how many people lived in a certain British town between 1951 and 2011, while the second depicts how the proportion of residents from five various age groups changed during the same period. 

Overall

Overall, there was an increase in the total population of this place, despite a downward trend in the percentage of 30-64-year-olds.

Body paragraph 1

In terms of the total population, the number was 100,000 in 1951. After that, it doubled, reaching 200,000 in 1991 before dropping slightly to approximately 175,000 in 2011.

Body paragraph 2

Turning to the percentage of people of different ages, those under 15 and those between 15 and 29 accounted for 15% each. Following this, the figures grew gradually to roughly 22% and 20% in 2011 respectively. Likewise, the proportion of senior citizens aged 65 and over also increased, but rapidly from 10% in 1951 to 25% in 2011.In contrast, 30-39-year-old people represented around 18% in 1951 and some 19% in 1971. However, the figure had almost halved to 12% by 2011. Although the percentage of 40-64-year-olds was by far the highest, at 45%, it dropped to just over 30% in 1991 and 20% in 2011.

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Từ, cụm từNghĩaVí dụ
illustratesminh họaThe first bar chart illustrates how many people lived…
depictsmiêu tả…while the second depicts how the proportion of residents…
OverallNhìn chungOverall, there was an increase in the total population…
despite a downward trendmặc dù có xu hướng giảm…despite a downward trend in the percentage of 30-64-year-olds.
In terms ofVề mặtIn terms of the total population, the number was…
doubledtăng gấp đôiAfter that, it doubled, reaching 200,000 in 1991…
dropping slightly togiảm nhẹ xuống…before dropping slightly to approximately 175,000 in 2011.
Turning toChuyển sangTurning to the percentage of people of different ages…
accounted forchiếm…those under 15 and those between 15 and 29 accounted for 15% each.
grew graduallytăng dầnFollowing this, the figures grew gradually to roughly 22% and 20% in 2011 respectively.
senior citizensngười cao tuổi…the proportion of senior citizens aged 65 and over also increased…
rapidlynhanh chóng…but rapidly from 10% in 1951 to 25% in 2011.
In contrastNgược lạiIn contrast, 30-39-year-old people represented around 18% in 1951…
by far the highestcao nhất cho đến nayAlthough the percentage of 40-64-year-olds was by far the highest…
dropped to just overgiảm xuống chỉ còn hơn…it dropped to just over 30% in 1991 and 20% in 2011.

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