Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart (Phần 31)

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Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

The chart below shows the average electricity price in Australia from 2005 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

Introduction

The bar chart illustrates changes in the electricity rates in four states in Australia: New South Wales (NSW), Queensland (QLD), Victoria (VIC) and South Australia (SA) between 2005 and 2011. 

Overall

Overall, there was a rise in how much people paid for electricity in all states, expect NSW which recorded a drop.

Body paragraph 1

For NSW and VIC, NSW in 2005 had by far the highest rate of these states, with residents charged approximately AU$80 per megawatt per hour. The figure then decreased noticeably to around AU$45 in 2009 but had increased slightly to about AU$55 by 2011. In contrast, in VIC the price was some AU$30 initially, and after that, it had almost doubled by 2009 before dipping to around AU$50 in 2011.

Body paragraph 2

Regarding the other two jurisdictions, Queenslanders enjoyed the lowest rate in 2005, at about AU$29, which was around AU$20 lower than that in SA, at AU$50. During the entire period, the rate in QLD experienced a fluctuation, at around AU$50 in 2007, AU$45 in 2009 and AU$60 in 2011, while the figure in SA in 2009 was twice higher than that in 2007, at AU$80 and AU$160 respectively. However, people in SA paid approximately AU$95 in the end.

Từ vựng tích lũy

Từ, cụm từNghĩaVí dụ
a rise insự tăngthere was a rise in how much people paid for electricity…
recorded a dropghi nhận sự giảmexcept NSW which recorded a drop
by far the highestcao nhất cho đến nayNSW in 2005 had by far the highest rate of these states…
decreased noticeablygiảm đáng kểThe figure then decreased noticeably to around AU$45…
had almost doubledđã gần như tăng gấp đôiit had almost doubled by 2009…
dipping togiảm xuốngbefore dipping to around AU$50 in 2011
enjoyed the lowest rateđược hưởng mức giá thấp nhấtQueenslanders enjoyed the lowest rate in 2005, at about AU$29
experienced a fluctuationtrải qua sự dao độngthe rate in QLD experienced a fluctuation…
twice higher thancao gấp đôi so vớiin 2009 was twice higher than that in 2007…
in the endcuối cùngpeople in SA paid approximately AU$95 in the end

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