Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart (Phần 16)

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bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart (Phần 16)

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Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

The chart below shows the number of people employed in five types of work in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Bài viết mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 dạng Bar chart

Introduction

The bar chart illustrates how many people worked in different sectors in a particular Australian area in two separate years: 2001 and 2008.

Overview

Overall, by far the most individuals were employees in the sales industry while the fewest worked in the farming area.

Body paragraph 1

In terms of sales, approximately 155,000 and around 165,000 people worked as a sales representative in 2001 and 2008 respectively. Although the numbers of those employed in the nursing and computing industries were similar initially, at roughly 55,000, yet while the figure for those employed in the nursing sector saw a moderate growth to about 57,500 in 2008, that for those with a computing position rose significantly, reaching just under 80,000 in the end.

Body paragraph 2

Regarding the other two types of work, there were more than 60,000 accountants in 2001, and the number was considerably higher than that of farmers, at about 25,000. However, fewer people had been recruited in these two areas by 2008, and the figure was nearly 60,000 for accounting and almost 20,000 for farming.

Từ vựng tích lũy

Cụm từNghĩaVí dụ
Sales industryNgành bán hàng…by far the most individuals were employees in the sales industry…
Sales representativeĐại diện bán hàng…approximately 155,000 and around 165,000 people worked as a sales representative in 2001 and 2008 respectively.
Computing industryNgành công nghệ thông tinAlthough the numbers of those employed in the computing industry were similar initially…
Nursing sectorLĩnh vực y tế…the figure for those employed in the nursing sector saw a moderate growth…
Rose significantlyTăng đáng kể…that for those with a computing position rose significantly…”
Considerably higher thanCao hơn đáng kể so với…and the number was considerably higher than that of farmers…
By far the most individualsCho đến nay hầu hết các cá nhân…By far the most individuals were employees in the sales industry.
Moderate growthSự tăng trưởng vừa phảiThe figure for those employed in the nursing sector saw a moderate growth.
Reached just underÐạt gần như dưới……reaching just under 80,000 in the end.

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